You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
– what was the item
– why it was important that you get it immediately
– what you suggest the company should do now
I would to like to complain about delay in delivery of a headset which i had ordered online through your company website, www.emax.com, dated 13 July 2019. It was product no: 2256, a black color 'Bose' headset with its first kind of unique feature of noise cancellation.
Reason why, i had ordered this particular gadget because i am travelling to foreign country with my friends on 18th of this month and its new feature does not allow outer noise while listening the music. Which means i can listen end numbers of music tracks without any disturbance. since i have not received my product next day of ordering it, i am feeling very much stressed because whole idea of buying would be waste if can cant carry with me during my journey.
Hence, i would like to suggest you, if you can check in your system if this item is available in any of your store with in the city, i can go myself to collect it as i need it urgently.
I hope my proposal is worth for you, instead of delay is from your organization side.
Yours sincerely,
Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut delay in delivery of a headset which i had ordered online through your company...
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Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re of noise cancellation. Reason why, i had ordered this particular gadget beca...
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Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... ordered this particular gadget because i am travelling to foreign country with m...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... outer noise while listening the music. Which means i can listen end numbers of music...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... while listening the music. Which means i can listen end numbers of music tracks ...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...f music tracks without any disturbance. since i have not received my product next day...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ved my product next day of ordering it, i am feeling very much stressed because w...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...le idea of buying would be waste if can cant carry with me during my journey. Henc...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rry with me during my journey. Hence, i would like to suggest you, if you can c...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... in any of your store with in the city, i can go myself to collect it as i need i...
^
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... city, i can go myself to collect it as i need it urgently. I hope my proposal ...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur organization side. Yours sincerely, Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46842105263 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44319961868 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2039641832 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141195160514 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529560911998 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419726761577 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863130620904 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334131460482 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.