You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say– what was the item– why it was important that you get it immediately– what you suggest the company

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to one of your camera which i purchased la...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... in regards to one of your camera which i purchased last week but never received ...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...on from your side. I am looking forward to receive it as quickly as possible else want you...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...ted prize but because of your reputation,i selected your enterprise. When i ordere...
^^
Line 13, column 128, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ed prize but because of your reputation,i selected your enterprise. When i ordere...
^
Line 13, column 161, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tation,i selected your enterprise. When i ordered camera online thru official web...
^
Line 13, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ra online thru official website of yours,it was showing that if i order it right no...
^^^
Line 13, column 239, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...website of yours,it was showing that if i order it right now then i will get it b...
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Line 13, column 265, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...owing that if i order it right now then i will get it by tomorrow otherwise i hav...
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Line 13, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...herwise i have to wait till next Tuesday,so ordered it promptly. the main reason wh...
^^^
Line 13, column 358, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ll next Tuesday,so ordered it promptly. the main reason why i am in so much hurry i...
^^^
Line 13, column 378, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rdered it promptly. the main reason why i am in so much hurry is,i am a travel bl...
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Line 13, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...main reason why i am in so much hurry is,i am a travel blogger and i am roaming ar...
^^
Line 13, column 403, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ain reason why i am in so much hurry is,i am a travel blogger and i am roaming ar...
^
Line 13, column 429, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...much hurry is,i am a travel blogger and i am roaming around the globe and clickin...
^
Line 13, column 515, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tures of different architecture however i had my old camera but it broke down sud...
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Line 13, column 624, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...nned my next trip on upcoming Saturday. so i have to get my camera before Friday n...
^^
Line 19, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
... I would like to suggest you that,if you could personally look into this mat...
^^^
Line 19, column 149, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... as soon as possible or refund my money.i am looking forward to hear positive new...
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Line 19, column 170, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...or refund my money.i am looking forward to hear positive news from you. Yours F...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75700934579 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52560042855 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672897196262 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5214166644 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174776533545 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663207755531 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420141352852 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115262136731 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104207393742 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.