You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
– what was the item
– why it was important that you get it immediately
– what you suggest the company should do now
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction with the laptop, which I purchased from a Flipkart on the Big billion sale.
I bought the dell laptop model number N5010 Inspirion series from the Flipkart website. it is of 4GB ram and 64GB of hard disk space. my order number is O2714157 and the order purchased date is 27th October 2019.
Initially, the laptop was giving outstanding performance. Although in the second week, it started giving a heating issue. Yesterday, when I opened my laptop, A blue screen came with an error message of hard disk corrupted.
I am a regular customer of the dell brand. it was my third laptop in the last 2 years. I never faced any issues in my earlier buy. However, this product broke my trust from the brand. I would appreciate if you could replace the complete product and not repairing it.
Thank you for taking the time to read this. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
A Kansal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...irion series from the Flipkart website. it is of 4GB ram and 64GB of hard disk spa...
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Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...of 4GB ram and 64GB of hard disk space. my order number is O2714157 and the order ...
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Line 25, column 44, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...m a regular customer of the dell brand. it was my third laptop in the last 2 years...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53110173273 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9563133033 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7333333333 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119093387624 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375428433201 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336682987717 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673959357696 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307507469534 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.84 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.