You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the m

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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.

Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir/Ma’am,

My account title is Huma, holding an account number 00-000000 in your esteemed bank. I express my dissatisfaction with the service provided by the bank to your old customers.

A request has been placed for a new cheque book to be provided but it has been two weeks with no response from your side. I have called your bank and a staff member assured me that it would be delivered within a week but I am still waiting for it. Being a working woman, I have to mange all chores at home along with my job and kids and it is nearly impossible for me to visit your bank again and again for a new cheque book. It is very urgent for me to have it as my utility bills are due this month. I would like you to inform me how long more it would be going to take to be delivered and to take necessary action for the delay.

Looking forward for your prompt response.

Yours faithfully

XYZ

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30813953488 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4153250909 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7710223743 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181406795334 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705812097226 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417663938073 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663311983766 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724134726957 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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