You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful.
Dear Mr. Wong,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the immaculate service and organisation of the 90th birthday of my grandfather unforgettable. I am very content with your service. The event was on 21st of February in the main ballroom. There were over 100 guests, mainly being elderly friends of my grandfather and a few younger family members.
Firstly, the ballroom was conveniently accessible from the parking lot. For a few guests that use wheelchairs, were able to join with comfort thanks to the ramps located at the entrance. Additionally, the theme of the party was well thought of and comfortable seats made it relaxing for the guests to chat and enjoy their time. Moreover, the classical music played during the event created a classical ambiance. Particularly, the highlight of the night was the food and games, which the guests cherished a lot.
Finally, a vote of thanks to your team for their adequate care, especially “Lily” who went out of the way and helped in making the event memorable.
Yours sincerely,
- birthday 11
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 89
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
- birthday 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, moreover, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93663716007 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9349162286 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222573146296 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648268442846 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504902669856 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119047065046 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698058393681 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.