You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Estimable Manager
I am writing to relate my gratitude for the service received at your hotel during my grandmother’s ninetieth birthday party. I thank you very much for the outstanding arrangements that was put together, in addition to the ambiance created. The quality and presentation of the food provided was remarkably committed and everyone feel gratified. I was particularly pleased with the service provided by your team and in their efficiency to have everything run smoothly.
My grandmother was overwhelmed with joy on that faithful evening and was immensely pleased with the delightful opportunity to reunite with several friends and family members. More so, I would like to extend a note of gratitude to your music minder (DJ) for his choice in music which reflected my grandmothers earlier days and which recalled her to her youth.
The whole experience has been an absolute pleasure for my family and I thank you again for your efforts.
With kind Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Estimable Manager I am writing to relate my gratitude for ...
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Line 6, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and I thank you again for your efforts. With kind Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24683544304 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03737467704 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0414859783 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156564233928 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656853195839 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474560619169 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118173052235 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347310630617 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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