Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to appreciate the services provided by your Park View Hotel during a party, which was organised by me.
Actually, the 90th birthday party of my grandfather was held in Aroma hall, last Sunday, in the late evenings.It was a wonderful day since several extra benefits such as 40% discount on desserts and snacks were provided on account of Diwali festival.
The particular event has left an everlasting impression on almost every person's mind who was present there, particularly,my grandfather as he was pleasantly surprised to experience the heart touching arrangements as well as decoration on his 90th birthday. Moreover, all the guests were appreciating the food quality with each and every bite.
Unfortunately, cake fell down while bringing, but I am so thankful to Mr Sharma, the head waiter since he brought another cake instantly. We all family members were literally terrified; however he saved the most awaited moment of my grandfather.
I am so grateful to you and your staff for being so Cooperative and would surely recommend your hotel to all my dear ones.
Yours faithfully,
Maria Roy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2192513369 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95247223217 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711229946524 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9383301152 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 4.34317383033 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182258475916 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629202041944 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492802001123 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906536303725 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04851798077 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.