You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
I am writing to you to express my delight with the excellent service and high quality of food that your hotel provided us last Sunday night, On the occasion of my father's 90th birthday, the party was outstanding in all respects.
Most of the people were in the age range of 90s and 80s, so the arrangements of the party were according to the choice and age requirements of senior people. All your staff did well and made the party enjoyable by providing amazing seating arrangements with classical music. In your staff, the waiters were professional, especially Mr. John did a fabulous job to fulfil all of our requirements.
The quality and presentation of the food, particularly the soft food list, offered by you, made all the guests feel more satisfied. The variety of drinks served in the hotel were at the correct temperature. All the food was not only tasty but also fully healthy and fresh, to satisfy the need of aged people.
All-in-all, I and my guests enjoyed a lot at your hotel. Thanks a lot for the services you have delivered.
Respectfully yours,
xyz
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79679144385 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75371474449 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4787570685 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194376496755 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713431112192 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532949839977 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12219215134 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045875244965 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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