You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter
• explain how you found the shop
• describe the item that you would like to sell
• say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to one of the table lamp of ancient times that I am willing to sell at your shop.
To begin with, please allow me to explain you how I came across your shop. As I am a great lover of collecting old coins, while surfing on net I found the name of your shop and was fascinated to see the entire photo gallery. In addition to it, i enquired about your place in Google listing and found to be legitimate
As for the item, it is the 18th century lantern, 3 feet in height and is made up of copper that is joint to a wooden table. Above all, it has a dazzling stone engraved on its body that gives twinkling light when gets lighted. Not only it gives beautiful light but also it gives fantastic look when placed at the corner of the room.
On top of it, I am anxious to sell this lamp in not less than 2 lakhs rupees. This antiquity matters a lot because of its existence till date so, I find the selling price worth it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ntire photo gallery. In addition to it, i enquired about your place in Google lis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, as for, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21890547264 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16108316328 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.29315153 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199233731663 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727982715239 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619532393884 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103359383381 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514477463786 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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