You planned to throw a surprise party for your father on his 60th birthday.
Write a letter to your aunt, in your letter, write-
• Invite her to the surprise party
• Explain why this party means a lot to you
• Say what you want to bring with her
Dear Aunt May,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirit. I am writing to formally invite you for Dad's Birthday.
This coming 20th of June, I have planned a blue and gold themed soiree for Dad's celebration. It will be held at the famous Simeon's White House near East Park and I would be delighted if you can attend. One of his requested gifts is the Château Palmer Margaux wine which is famous there in Paris and I as his favourite sister, I am well aware that you will be bringing one as a gift.
Aside from his birthday, this year is also special to my parents as they will be celebrating their 25th wedding anniversary. As part of the program, I have invited a priest to officiate there renewal of vows. My friends and I have already prepared everything that is needed both for the wedding and the party, I just hope that you can come.
I will be sending the RSVP through email and I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Joyce Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Aunt May, I hope this letter finds yo...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...l be sending the RSVP through email and Im looking forward to hearing from you soo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43406593407 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29854939213 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8362583986 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185512525687 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764126919614 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607418521061 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127015381507 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812695879279 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.