You play sport (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter:
1– Say how you feel about the news
2– Ask about the treatment in the hospital
3– Suggest some ways of cheering him/her up
Dear Matt,
It`s been so long since we have met in last football match. I heard the bad news about your accident, and I hope you are recovering well!
I went yesterday to our normal training at the club, and I expected to meet you all there. When the coach told me that you made a big car accident last month, I got totally shocked for this terrible news. It is extremely disappointed that you won`t catch our next match in the new city`s league. We will lose you as one of the key players.
I came to know that you are in Maadi hospital, and you are in a private room till finishing the treatment period. Therefore, please advise me how is the level of medical service of the hospital? and if there is any missing medication or equipment for your case. I have a good connection network in the hospital, and they can assist you when required.
The current season is in its beginning stage, and there are many matches to go. I would inform you that you can catch us in the coming matches which will be very important to decide the champion. I hope you a speedy recovery during your treatment plan.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51196172249 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43581557185 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4641349286 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5384615385 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273867228328 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892013611677 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693627837933 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169533307754 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297224506767 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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