You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong.
Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
1- What is the article about?
2- What is the error?
3- What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards with the article that you have written on the newspaper about my close friend Mr. Adam.
I would like to inform you that the published information about Mr. Adam are totally wrong, and he has proofed that he is innocent from the car accident. When he transferred the man, who was hit on the accident, to the hospital, police suspected that he would be the car driver. The media started by then to put his name as the offender.
Mr. Adam was shocked for the police accusation; however, he trusted that the true investigation will lead to the real offender. Recently, Police took the assistance of the road`s cameras, and the footage cleared the right car number which was in the accident. Accordingly, Mr. Adam is freed directly from the case, and police unblocked his car.
You can check the final police report which is filled at the police station in same area, and they can give you a copy as a reference. I would therefore expect that you publish an apology statement for the wrong information about Mr. Adam, and that you edit the truth along with police report.
I look forward to the news being corrected.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, look, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50264712462 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9409822074 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205014407883 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727719002738 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103441331715 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118234937259 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10741731447 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.