You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital.Write a letter to your team-mate. In your lettersay how you feel about the newsask about the treatment in the hospitalsuggest some ways of che

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...arm and you are admitted to the Hospital . This can cause great loss to our team ,...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... . This can cause great loss to our team , specially when we are close to our foot...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en we are close to our football finals. I spoke to the medical staff and they in...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...orts and injury centre for the treatment . Usually these kinds of injury take more...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...hese kinds of injury take more than two week to recover but I am confident that the ...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of best doctors and best physiotherapist with latest exercise equipments. Please ...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... best doctors and best physiotherapist with latest exercise equipments. Please share your ...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hare your experience about the treatment ,if you need any kind of assistance i wil...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ent ,if you need any kind of assistance i will come and help you out. I would a...
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Line 4, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...istance i will come and help you out. I would also like to share a very good new...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'very good news'.
Suggestion: very good news
...p you out. I would also like to share a very good news with you that you are nominated as the ...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... tournament considering your past record .I wish you all my blessings so that you ...
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Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ournament considering your past record .I wish you all my blessings so that you c...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... kind of benefit from this. Yours Truly
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40322580645 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36166200797 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.8029589077 44.8134815571 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.5 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 16.8248392259 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351215820857 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164212656674 0.0766984524023 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624690397276 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228400400503 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018349236036 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.