Dear Mr. Verma,
My name is Rohit Gill and I have recently moved with my family to the apartment D-6 which is owned by you . I am writing to express my concern about the condition of the existing furniture in this house.
Firstly , I would like to inform you that that the amenities apart from furniture are in excellent condition however some of the furniture items are damaged. Like in the master bedroom one drawer of the side table is not closing properly, the other major problem is with living room where the fabric of sofa is torn from one side while one leg of dining table is cracked from below .lastly the legs of the two chair of the dining table are not aligned properly causing disbalance.
I would be really grateful to you , if you may arrange for a carpenter and fabric installer at this residence so that the restoration work could be carried out as soon as possible .
Yours faithfully
Rohit Gill
- You and your family are living in rental accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,1. introduce yourself2. explain what is wrong with the 56
- You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital.Write a letter to your team-mate. In your lettersay how you feel about the newsask about the treatment in the hospitalsuggest some ways of che 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is Rohit Gill and I have recently moved with my family to the apartment D-6 whi...
^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y moved with my family to the apartment D-6 which is owned by you . I am writing...
^^
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the apartment D-6 which is owned by you . I am writing to express my concern abou...
^^
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ting furniture in this house. Firstly , I would like to inform you that that th...
^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... Firstly , I would like to inform you that that the amenities apart from furniture are...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that the amenities apart from furniture are in excellent condition however some...
^^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture are in excellent condition however some of the furniture items are damage...
^^
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...re are in excellent condition however some of the furniture items are damaged. Like in th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are in excellent condition however some of the furniture items are damaged. Lik...
^^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in excellent condition however some of the furniture items are damaged. Like in...
^^
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the side table is not closing properly, the other major problem is with living ...
^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...operly, the other major problem is with living room where the fabric of sofa is ...
^^
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eg of dining table is cracked from below .lastly the legs of the two chair of the ...
^^
Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g table are not aligned properly causing disbalance. I would be really gratef...
^^
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ausing disbalance. I would be really grateful to you , if you may arrange for...
^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e. I would be really grateful to you , if you may arrange for a carpenter and ...
^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...could be carried out as soon as possible . Yours faithfully Rohit Gill
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, really, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6303030303 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36120625585 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.380918261 44.8134815571 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 4.34317383033 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143333256748 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703068028352 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030527222315 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081358160444 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152344643498 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.