You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter,
•tell him which team won
•describe the conditions on the day
•say how you felt about the match.
Dear Tom,
I was shocked to know that you had accident on Monday, just before our semifinal match. Henry who went with you in hospital updated me that you suffered minor fracture and recuperating well. I just arrived today from London so could not get chance to come to hospital to see you.
On semifinal day, we were bit nervous without and everyone was discussing the suitable replacement of you. Finally, we agreed that Mathew can fulfill your role up-to some extent and I must praise him about his performance. Because of his bowling, we won the match with hack club.
It was cloudy and bit humid so conditions were perfect for fast bowlers. I am sure you would have liked the pitch and full packed stadium with our supporters. Post lunch, there were some rain which interrupted the match but did not last much and game continued till end.
In my view, it was important match and with the team efforts we stormed into semifinal. It was full of thrill and competitive till last hours.
I wish you get well soon and ready for final match which is scheduled after 1 month.
With Love,
Ashish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Tom, I was shocked to know that you had accid...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
... to see you. On semifinal day, we were bit nervous without and everyone was discus...
^^^
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bowlers. I am sure you would have liked the pitch and full packed stadium with o...
^^^
Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...led after 1 month. With Love, Ashish
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63775510204 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3085762185 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4605688258 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9230769231 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243846023329 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797292833245 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395513742824 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1180885333 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374621445411 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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