You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear Alex,
Hi, hope you are recovering faster and would love to see you back in the ground soon. I am excited to tell you about the yesterdays' qualifier match for which we were selected. The match between Exide XI and trf was won by the later team with 2-0 final result and we will be facing TRF in the final match coming week. Now I would like to waffle you about our match which was played in the scorching heat in mid day. I was playing center forward and shantanu was our right centre and rinku was playing from your position from left. We were struggled a lot in the first half and just managed to keep draw.
While the second half of the game was no different and TML team were firing goals like tanks but I would appreciate our great wall sudarshan who was neither got down nor tensed. Sudarshan almost guarded almost a dozen goals and finally just before the final whistle rinku gave a fantastic pass which was converted in goal by shantanu and that created history and we landed into final.
Hence the final score was 1-0, this was the moment of joy for all of us and I would owe this win to my giant goalkeeper Sudarshan. I wish you were with us at this moment of celebration. Get well soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'yesterdays'' or 'yesterday's'?
Suggestion: yesterdays'; yesterday's
...oon. I am excited to tell you about the yesterdays qualifier match for which we were selec...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...s playing from your position from left. we were struggled a lot in the first half ...
^^
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d we TML team was firing like tanks but i would appreciate our great wall sudarsh...
^
Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sudarshan
...han who was nither got down nor tensed. sudarshan almost gaurded almost a dozen goals and...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...d history and we landed into final. Hence the final score was 1-0, this was the m...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 77, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...was the monent of joy for all of us and i would this win to my gaint gaol keeper ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27192982456 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04996828268 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.990681372 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5454545455 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157484133645 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691062341896 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617356030308 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101238788676 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856899928248 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.