You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear Jack,
Get well soon buddy!
I hope you recovering from your accident. Actually, through this letter, I want to tell you about the match that was played by our football team this weekend.
Let me shed some light on that day. Firstly, I really feel so glad that our team won the match, but we really missed you, buddy. I hope, you definitely feel jubilant after this success of our football team.
Secondly, Because of the very hot weather, the condition of both team members was very bad. Therefore, not only the players but also is also the spectators were unable to take interest in this match. But, in the final round, when both teams stuck on the same score, then the situation was totally changed. this was the eye-catching situation, and at the last minute, one of our team members made a goal and everyone from our side, hooting loudly with enthusiasm.
Still, I felt so happy for our team, but I really missed you at that moment. If you were with us on that day, then our happiness will be double. At last, the hard work of our team converts into success. I'm sure, in the next match, you will able to join us. I would like to suggest to take rest and as well as eat healthy food to get well soon.
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 307, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...then the situation was totally changed. this was the eye-catching situation, and at ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 204, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...work of our team converts into success. Im sure, in the next match, you will able ...
^^
Line 11, column 274, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest taking'.
Suggestion: suggest taking
...u will able to join us. I would like to suggest to take rest and as well as eat healthy food to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47598253275 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15324141245 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628820960699 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5667860796 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270488120837 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879132556836 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626103484728 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147231697179 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967133442662 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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