You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear Rahul,
I think, this letter will find you in some relief and best of spirit.
Writing this letter to tell you about the match in which you were absent due to a road accident.
it is glad to know that our team won the match with just one goal. Shushant Played well in your place and gave his best towards the game.
that match was neck to neck, we did 4 goal against Australian team and they all do the same. After finishing the time it was a tie and then commentator annouce about tie breaker that is penalty shoot out in which, assosiation gave 5 chance of shoot out to each team.
As you are our best capable goal keeper and made record for maximum goal stopage. we all the members were freightened that, is it possible to win the match ? But with the maximum effort of Sushant we won this by 1 goal.
Finally, we acheived our position back in the hearts of our team fans.
Hope you will recover soon by following the instructions of Doctor and I will come soon to see you.
Yours truly
Ram
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ere absent due to a road accident. it is glad to know that our team won the m...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...nd gave his best towards the game. that match was neck to neck, we did 4 goal a...
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Line 21, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...d made record for maximum goal stopage. we all the members were freightened that, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, then, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46596858639 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10158024827 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8611338985 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0833333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265456718906 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914574410573 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599741630925 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123274335332 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692169293964 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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