In today's world, crime is the major problem which is being faced by all the nations and in spite, of several efforts, it's rate is increasing unceasingly. Now, many people firmly believe that there should be one definitive penance for all the offences. On the contrary, some are not in favour of this notion. Therefore, in this essay, I will shed some light on the pros and cons of this ideology followed by my own opinion in the end of it.
To embark upon, the substantial benefit of it is that it will certainly dwindle the time taken in giving the judgement. It is no exaggeration to state that there are innumerable number of cases are hanging in air in the court's of every country and state. It is simply due to the infinite time period consumed in the court proceedings. In fact, I can give an excellent example of my own nation India where more than ten lacks of cases are pending in Supreme court alone which is lamentable. Because of this delay, huge number of innocent people are waiting in prisons for their hearing to start and are bound to live a very wretched life.
In contrast, the considerable drawback of this kind of judiciary system is that the justice done will no longer be fair. Allow me to elaborate this statement by presenting a hypothetical situation where an individual has brutally murdered someone and there is another men that has stolen some money from someone's purse. Now, is it justified to give them the indistinguishable sentence. As, a murderer is liable to to be imprisoned for at least ten years. On the other hand, to announce such rigorous penalty for a thief would be absolutely cruel and inhuman.
Conspicuously, I would like to mention assertively that all human beings are different and thus commit sundry sins. Though, it appears quite tempting at hurried glance to implement one penance for all criminals due to its time saving approach and feasibility. Nonetheless, it would be inequitable to look at everyone with the same prospective and to give them all the identical punishment. I am of the opinion that the downsides of this idea far outweigh any positive repercussions and also it is inevitably against the humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are another men'?
Suggestion: there are another men
...idual has brutally murdered someone and there is another men that has stolen some money from someone...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...able sentence. As, a murderer is liable to to be imprisoned for at least ten years. O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, at least, in contrast, in fact, kind of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77984084881 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77496433793 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575596816976 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6045235717 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0875104347431 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264014290751 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405862371614 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532346785818 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292711098942 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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