You read a newspaper article that captured your attention.Write a letter to your friend
and recommend reading the article. Include the following in your letter
Where and when the article was published
What the article was about
Why it is important that your friend reads it.
Dear Ros,
Hope you and the family are doing good. I'm just writing to say hi and
also let you know an article which caught my eye in last day's news paper.
It was published in The Hindu on the 4th of this month .I'm attaching the
the screen shot along with the website link for you in case you have trouble finding it in the shops or
online.
The reason it grabbed my attention was because it was about new rule by the government to collect
tuition fees in private schools during lock down!I was sort of excited by seeing the updated
regulation and I could say it is a happy news.According to the new law schools are allowed to collect only 70 percent of the total
tuition fee as well as they are not suppose to collect any extra charges. Don't you feel it is
a great beneficial?.
Have you heard about this earlier? It sounded like the rule is imposed from last month
but the schools kept it secret and are still collecting 100% payment without any consideration.
Shocking! I wanted to let you know directly so that you can spread the information to
your family and friends .If you're already across it, that's great.
Anyway,hope we can meet soon. Stay safe and well!
Best Wishes
Beneetha
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...Hope you and the family are doing good. Im just writing to say hi and also let y...
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...oing good. Im just writing to say hi and also let you know an article which caugh...
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...u know an article which caught my eye in last days news paper. It was publishe...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
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...an article which caught my eye in last days news paper. It was published in The ...
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Suggestion: newspaper
...ticle which caught my eye in last days news paper. It was published in The Hindu on th...
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...ed in The Hindu on the 4th of this month .Im attaching the the screen shot along...
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... in The Hindu on the 4th of this month .Im attaching the the screen shot along w...
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... in The Hindu on the 4th of this month .Im attaching the the screen shot along w...
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... on the 4th of this month .Im attaching the the screen shot along with the website link...
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... on the 4th of this month .Im attaching the the screen shot along with the website link...
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... the 4th of this month .Im attaching the the screen shot along with the website l...
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... have trouble finding it in the shops or online. The reason it grabbed my atte...
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...ut new rule by the government to collect tuition fees in private schools during l...
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...ees in private schools during lock down!I was sort of excited by seeing the updat...
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...as sort of excited by seeing the updated regulation and I could say it is a happy...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'happy news'.
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...ated regulation and I could say it is a happy news.According to the new law schools are al...
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...tion and I could say it is a happy news.According to the new law schools are allowed to c...
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Suggestion: supposed
...al tuition fee as well as they are not suppose to collect any extra charges. Dont you ...
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...t suppose to collect any extra charges. Dont you feel it is a great beneficial?. ...
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...t any extra charges. Dont you feel it is a great beneficial?. Have you heard a...
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... information to your family and friends .If youre already across it, thats great....
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...nformation to your family and friends .If youre already across it, thats great. ...
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...rmation to your family and friends .If youre already across it, thats great. Anyw...
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...nd friends .If youre already across it, thats great. Anyway,hope we can meet soon....
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Suggestion: , hope
...lready across it, thats great. Anyway,hope we can meet soon. Stay safe and well! ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon. Stay safe and well! Best Wishes Beneetha
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, so, still, well, sort of, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58181818182 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32519438448 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.183362861 44.8134815571 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 100.8 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 2.54639175258 1021% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214166884073 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687688659665 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555594656843 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061095299237 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498461677947 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.