You read a newspaper article that captured your attention. Write a letter to your friend and recommend reading the article. Include the following in your letter:
• Where and when the article was published
• What the article was about
• Why it is important that your friend reads it.
Dear Paveethra,
I hope that you are doing well. I know that you are finding it very difficult to handle your kids without any assistance. I have a habit of reading the newspaper everyday and one of the articles has caught my attention recently. I am writing this letter to give you more details regarding the article and how it would be beneficial for you.
The content was published in "The Daily News" newspaper on 29th April 2023 with a title named "How to Raise Your Child?". This was a Mother's edition newspaper which includes information that all mothers need to know. This article specifies the details on how to bring up the kids without shouting or raising our hand at them and also, talks about ways to encourage children on being independent, how to support them emotionally and so on. Furthermore, they have mentioned that a few workshops specially for new mom's are soon to be conducted by them in future as well.
I have sent an email attaching the photocopy of the article. You can either read it from there or you can also go through the news from the newspaper directly if you can. This content will give you a broad view of how to handle your kids with more love and affection rather than struggling on your own. You can also attend the workshops if you are interested.
Just remember that you are doing a great job as a Mother !!
With Love,
Barkavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...I have a habit of reading the newspaper everyday and one of the articles has caught my a...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...icles has caught my attention recently. I am writing this letter to give you more...
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Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: SENT_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'emailed'.
Suggestion: emailed
...ed by them in future as well. I have sent an email attaching the photocopy of the article....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58281159065 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3828422987 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299907959026 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950342727467 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637809693757 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17172570231 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102584121356 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.