You recently applied for 2 separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:· An apology· An explanation of your situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have decided to move ahead this time with JP Morgan instead of your company's job offer, although it was you only who processed my offer letter within 3 working days.
Secondly, I would like to present my sincerest apologies for abandoning your offer and accepting theirs. This is because of the wonderful and one in a lifetime opportunity which I am getting at the moment out of this job. Furthermore, I know you have to start this recruitment process from scratch again and I can imagine of how painful it is going to be for you.
Thirdly, I would like to let you know that they are giving me the valuable chance to work from our headquarters office based in Toronto Canada and on top of that they are offering sponsorship for me to move to Canada. Finally, I don't want to do this injustice with me for which I would regret in my life.
Yours faithfully
Faizal Reza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ip for me to move to Canada. Finally, I dont want to do this injustice with me for w...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d regret in my life. Yours faithfully Faizal Reza
^^^
Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... life. Yours faithfully Faizal Reza
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, you know, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48571428571 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54205444795 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3539811882 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 4.34317383033 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214168083754 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945518704829 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747865100801 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151352888047 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658220082808 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.