You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
You do NOT need to write any address.
News is integral part of our life and media is known as fourth pillar of democracy. Having said that, media plays very strong role in shaping society. At one hand it's media responsbility to keep viewer or listner aware of current afairs and on the other hand Media should not forget their responsbility of shaping the future of society by spreadng positivity around.
Nowadays, every thing is commercialised including pring and electronic media. Since, media is independent and privatised, one of its foremost objective, similar to any other organization, is to make profit. To maintain their profitability, they tend to print news which attracts their viewer or help to maintain their viewerships. Pyscologists has proved that as a citizen we are more attracted towards negativity around us.
Secondly, due to fierece competetion, Media house compete with each other to break the news first. This generally lead them to compete for similar news and no news channel or reporter, in order to remain in the race and follow trend, step back and try to do somthing new.
On one hand negative news help people to understand what's going on around and on the other hand it also alert them, For example: If a Media publish news that crime against people travelling after midnight has increased, citizens will be cautious and will not tend to make such plan.
Negative news is important for awareness. However, it dosen't shape the society. News editor must show and print positive news. Pyschologist, who found out that people get attreported that ultimately negativity upset their mood and on the other hand positive news inspite of being not so attractive brings positivity in their mind. Positive news does inspire a society that inturns bring more postivity. For example: When a news channel suceess story of a poor boy, others also get inspired and try to achieve impossible goals.
Finally, I would like to end my argument by saying that media has been playing a very important role in society and it's time for them to raise their game and become a strong pillar in nation building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...negative news help people to understand whats going on around and on the other hand i...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alerts'?
Suggestion: alerts
...on around and on the other hand it also alert them, For example: If a Media publish n...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'Media'?
Suggestion: a medium; Media
...and it also alert them, For example: If a Media publish news that crime against people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 937.175257732 186% => OK
No of words: 349.0 206.0 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00286532951 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64952048213 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573065902579 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 290.88556701 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4616428359 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.705882353 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0223071217874 0.216113520407 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00794122010861 0.0766984524023 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0137226220085 0.0603063233224 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0153381945035 0.12726935374 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015391768143 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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