Dear Mr Smith,
Thank you for allowing me a day off to attend the Computer Operating System conference hosted by Google Cloud in Chicago. The conference helped me to gain insights about the recent technologies and trends in the computer networking space. I would like to share this knowledge with other teams in our company via a presentation.
I am planning to prepare a Microsoft power point presentation to express the ideas in an organised manner. The presentation will contain relevant examples along with a link to training website to keep the audience engaged with some hands-on practice.
Although the conference covered a vast array of topics, I don't want my audience to be overwhelmed by the content. So I have planned to cover three main topics: Computer Operating System commands, Computer Networking and computer virtual machines.
I think it will be beneficial for online, hardware and data acquisition teams to attend this presentation. However, given the current workload, the attendance will be optional. The auditorium at 10th floor should be the best place to conduct this presentation as it has a really good projector and speaker system.
Please let me know for any other suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Keith Vanecko.
- Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie.Is it necessary to spen a lot of money to make a good movie?What factors contribute to the success of a movie? 61
- Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie.Is it necessary to spen a lot of money to make a good movie?What factors contribute to the success of a movie? 61
- You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:•describe what type of 89
- Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie.Is it necessary to spen a lot of money to make a good movie?What factors contribute to the success of a movie? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rence covered a vast array of topics, I dont want my audience to be overwhelmed by t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.295 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93390098674 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2241828231 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163824681948 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553208112335 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419536092693 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698897097406 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680862579913 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.