You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home,
you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
• say where you think you left the papers
• explain why they are so important
• tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am writing to request your assistance in locating some important papers
which I believe were left at your hotel during my stay for a recent meeting.
If I recall correctly, the papers were left on the bedside table in room 204,
which was the room in which I had been staying. These documents were
inside a brown manilla envelope with the numbers ‘40613’ across the front.
It is of the utmost importance that papers are located since they are
imperative to a business deal which is due to be concluded this weekend. If
these files are not found, this deal will thoroughly jeopardised.
I regret that I have been so foolish as to misplace such vital documents, but I
would be sincerely grateful if you could take all necessary means to assist in
their location. Should these papers be found, please send them via express
delivery to the attached address.
Thank you for your help. Your swift cooperation is greatly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Matthew Rainsbury
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...nce in locating some important papers which I believe were left at your hotel durin...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eft on the bedside table in room 204, which was the room in which I had been stayin...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Inside
...ad been staying. These documents were inside a brown manilla envelope with the numbe...
^^^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Imperative
...hat papers are located since they are imperative to a business deal which is due to be c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... due to be concluded this weekend. If these files are not found, this deal will tho...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 54, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'jeopardise'
Suggestion: jeopardise
...re not found, this deal will thoroughly jeopardised. I regret that I have been so fool...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Their
...take all necessary means to assist in their location. Should these papers be found,...
^^^^^
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Delivery
...e found, please send them via express delivery to the attached address. Thank you...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20710059172 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71240951284 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0066341922 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.29896907216 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231115832672 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761468137646 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694588532177 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657987865156 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597020902218 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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