You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER REGARDING A BLACK FILE THAT I FORGOT AT YOUR PREMISES. I HAD VISITED THE HOTEL YESTERDAY MORNING AND I BELIEVE IT JUST SLIPPED MY MIND TO TAKE BACK THE PAPERS THAT I HAD BROUGHT WITH MYSELF.
A DAY BACK, WHEN I CAME TO YOUR HOTEL. I WENT STRAIGHT AWAY TO THE CONFERENCE HALL 2 FOR ATTENDING THE MEETING. I WAS SITTING IN THE SECOND ROW AT TOP RIGHT CORNER OF THE HALL. I HAD KEPT THE FILE ON A SMALL BLACK ROUND TABLE WHICH WAS PLACED AT THE LEFT SIDE OF MY SEAT.
THE FOLDER THAT JUST GOT MISPLACED CONTAINS SOME VERY SENSITIVE DOCUMENTS. THERE ARE MY LEGAL DOCUMENTS SUCH AS THE PROPERTY OWNER AGREEMENT, LICENCE CERTIFICATE AND AUTHORISATION CERTIFICATE OF MY COMPANY. THESE ARE PRIVATE DOCUMENTS WHICH NEED TO BE HANDLED WITH UTMOST CASE AS MISPLACEMENT OF THE SAME COULD LEAD ME INTO SOME SERIOUS ISSUES.
I REQUEST YOU TO ASK YOUR STAFF TO FETCH FOR MY PAPERS AND HAND IT OVER TO YOU AS SOON AS THEY FIND IT OUT. IT WOULD BE KIND ENOUGH OF YOU IF YOU COULD TAKE THEM IN YOUR CUSTODY AND RETURN BACK TO ME ON MY EARLIEST VISIT POSSIBLE TO THE HOPE. I REQUEST YOU TO TAKE IMMEDIATE REQUIRED ACTION AGAINST THE UNCERTAINTY. THANK YOU FOR YOUR CONSIDERATION.
YOURS FAITHFULLY
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
DEAR SIR, I AM WRITING THIS LETTER REGARDING A BLA...
^^^^
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ND ROW AT TOP RIGHT CORNER OF THE HALL. I HAD KEPT THE FILE ON A SMALL BLACK ROUN...
^
Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...FOR MY PAPERS AND HAND IT OVER TO YOU AS SOON AS THEY FIND IT OUT. IT WOULD BE KI...
^^
Line 9, column 184, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'RETURN'.
Suggestion: RETURN
...YOU COULD TAKE THEM IN YOUR CUSTODY AND RETURN BACK TO ME ON MY EARLIEST VISIT POSSIBLE TO ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... YOUR CONSIDERATION. YOURS FAITHFULLY
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47111111111 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5323584869 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6807973242 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3846153846 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309850511399 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964256565117 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811878137367 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151874980507 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113192036208 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.