You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
• say where you think you left the papers
• explain why they are so important
• tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about some important papers that I might have left in your “The Meridian” hotel while I was staying there for a conference meeting
To embark on, I booked a room in your hotel from 22nd September to 23rd September for a conference meeting organized by my company Mckinsey at the Business hall on 23rd September. I was staying in room number 624 and after participating in the meeting I checked out from the hotel on 24th September. When I had arrived in Delhi, I realized that I had left some critical documents in the hotel room, perhaps in the drawer on the left side of the bed. They are placed in a blue folder printed with the name Prabhpreet Kaur on the top.
Above all, the official papers are very critical for the company as they contain confidential and sensitive financial data, hard copy of the presentation and some notes that I registered during the conference. Those papers were as much as important to the company as they are to me and If they are misplaced the company will suffer huge losses and it will also impact my job position.
I will be obliged if you could kindly check the room thoroughly and once you discover the documents please give me a call at 7844546125. I will personally collect those documents from you.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Yours Sincerely
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s staying there for a conference meeting To embark on, I booked a room in your ho...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you soon Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon Yours Sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72540983607 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64713492293 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553278688525 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6152717875 44.8134815571 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.111111111 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 16.8248392259 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338673710425 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123020660367 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074382992531 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180445631366 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712117277556 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.