You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found your had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
-say were you tink you left te papers
-Explain why they are so important
-tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir,
My name is Jonson. I am writing this letter to tell you that I left my Important papers in your hotel room. I stayed in your hotel on the 29th of November. My room number was 101.
The place where I put those papers is in the cupboard on the right side of the bed. Those papers were in the second self of the cupboard. It's packed in the zip folder.
The reason such documents are important for me because these are original documents of power of attorney which was signed byte directors of our company and my manager gave me the responsibility to get they signed from the directors. If I will not get the papers of power of attorney back then I would probably lose my job.
I request you to please send the papers to my address by the end of this week. so that I can hand it over to my senior manager.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Raj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to get they signed from the directors. If I will not get the papers of power of a...
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Line 17, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... to my address by the end of this week. so that I can hand it over to my senior ma...
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Line 17, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to my address by the end of this week. so that I can hand it over to my senior manager...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39156626506 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29432675509 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0851837437 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0769230769 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254385365919 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911105470305 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107843243107 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14224230225 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890417252907 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.