During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. John,
My name is kate. I hope you remember me, we met on the flight which was a departure from London to New Delhi dated 25 January 2019. You sat next to me on the window seat. We had a long conversation at that time & you mentioned that you owning a chain of restaurants in various parts of India. I am writing to ask you if any job is available at your restaurant for me?
As there are many areas where I had great exposure such as Chef, Assistant Manager, etc. So, I will be interested in these types of jobs.
I want to tell you that I have pursued my hotel Management course from the Institute of Hotel Management, Canada. Moreover, I had great work exposure in a lot of countries. I am positive my skills and expertise will definitely be an asset to your organization.
Thank you in advance and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Kate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. John, My name is kate. I hope you remember me,...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48780487805 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61267659145 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689024390244 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6599773636 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3333333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193476500616 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701203049253 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706029617479 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106975228806 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083579606793 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.