You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the manager what you want to do

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Say where you think you left the papers.
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter for I missed my document at your hotel and I need prompt action from your side because it is so important document for me.

This is for your information that, Today I had meeting with some client in your hotel between 11. 00am to 1.00pm after that I came to reception desk for the payments and other formalities at that moment I think that I missed my document over there. It is validation report of one equipment of my company and it is momentous for us because it’s computer generator and very expensive. It is required to Prior to start machine and if I will not start machine it creates loss of my company
You can find same name “Validation report “in very bold at front page and it is hard file have colour is blue.

Kindly request you to check in your hotel and if you have any update for the same let me know on my mobile +919999999999

Your sincerely
Bhoomi sharma

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter for I missed my...
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Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt machine it creates loss of my company You can find same name 'Validation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50877192982 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52275306506 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8857932916 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171572971622 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820900211694 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678239724158 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124664474311 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793132198087 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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