You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.1- Say where you think you left the papers.2- Explain why they are so important3- Tell

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Off lately, meeting was held in your Mahejban Hotel in Kurukshetra by USG Boral Pvt. Ltd.. I am writing this letter as in the hurry , I forgot my dairy in the hall along with the paper file which consists of documents which are required at priority.

As I can memorise, the documents and dairy with me till the end of presentations as I was the last to give presentation and I took the documents to explain some facts. I believe that this was the last place where I had seen the paper file and my dairy. The dairy was on black colour with the logo of our company. You can clearly see the dairy from distance. In the paper file, there was some bills and quotations of products which I have to submit so that purchase can be done.

I would like to request to send the both as soon as earlier. You have our company address and you can send the both to the same address. Further more, I will be thankful if you can share the tracking number and do share the amount of courier which I will send you by account transfer.

Regards
Abhishek Singh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...tel in Kurukshetra by USG Boral Pvt. Ltd.. I am writing this letter as in the hurr...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...I am writing this letter as in the hurry , I forgot my dairy in the hall along wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32338308458 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27322614411 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0814944661 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209754617523 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706311503622 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709737087337 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130427010019 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545051513251 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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