You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding a black binder that I might have misplaced containing sensitive information at your hotel "Hotel ‘Le Meridian’ on 21st Feb.
My company, CUE, had booked the "sunflower" banquet hall from 10 am - 4 pm on 21st Feb for our annual Business Goal Review meet. I had taken notes in a black binder along with financial information of y company. Since our meeting ran overtime and have to evacuate the conference room for an upcoming reservation, I had hastly packed all my belongings and might have forgotten my documents with the black binder with my name "Dhanashree" on top of it.
The binder contains sensitive confidential information of my company and if fallen into wrong hands, could result in detrimental effects for my company and me.
I hope you understand the gravity of the situation and please ask your staff to conduct a thorough search at the banquet hall. If you find those papers, please give me a ring at 720-326-9944 and I will be more than happy to collect them at the earliest possible time.
Hoping to year with a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Dhanashree Hathaway.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09183673469 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29116481318 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663265306122 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3107809252 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147473022534 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613349211147 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679924849379 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670675515582 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086107618103 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.