You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you return your home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear sir,
I am Harry Singh, senior sales manager of Infosys private ltd. Yesterday, I attended an official sales meeting at your renowned hotel with my formal Japanese guests. I am writing this letter to enquire about some important papers, that I left there by mistake.
The meeting held at the conference room located at the third floor of the hotel. The meeting started and 6 pm and ended up around 8 pm after that we all went to your open roof dining area for dinner. The meeting was succesful but the most horrible thing happened to me was that by mistake I left the contract papers there at the meeting area.
As I mentioned, the meeting was with international clients and they flew back today morning. Also it is matter of great responsibility , I could not ask them to come again for signing the contract again. those contract papers are the most valuable thing that I own presently.
I would really appreciate if you request your staff members to check those papers, they were in Red folder with my company name engraved on it. I will be really grateful to you. you can contact me at 401-582-6998 to ask any further cue or share any information.
Hope to get a quick and positive revert from you regarding the matter.
Yours Sincerely
Harry singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am Harry Singh, senior sales manager ...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... your open roof dining area for dinner. The meeting was succesful but the most horr...
^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...nternational clients and they flew back today morning. Also it is matter of great responsibil...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ients and they flew back today morning. Also it is matter of great responsibility , ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lso it is matter of great responsibility , I could not ask them to come again for ...
^^
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Those
...e again for signing the contract again. those contract papers are the most valuable t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... it. I will be really grateful to you. you can contact me at 401-582-6998 to ask a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, regarding, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6875 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48858728331 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674107142857 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.746163508 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314949430941 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901255820797 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573128138444 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140071357444 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640234233996 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.