You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel, in your letter
Say where you think you left the papers
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I forget some important papers at your hotel and I need your supportive action to return them back. Yesterday, I had a meeting with clients in the conference room number 72. However, we finalized our gathering at 8:00 pm, then accidentally I left some documents which's extremely significant for my business.
Those papers in fact are top confidential documents which's included some contacts and private information about my customers and their businesses in the Middle East. Moreover, it has the agreed plan that we agreed to perform next time. Finally, it's also very important for me in order to prepare for the upcoming meeting with them which supposed to be held on November 26th.
Therefore, I would be extremely grateful if you could please send them back through any national courier as soon as possible into my office on Rd street 123 avenue, and I will pay for it.
Lastly, I hope my request does not cause any inconvenience. I look forward to receiving your great response.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... extremely significant for my business. Those papers in fact are top confidentia...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, it has the agreed plan that we agreed to perform next time. Finally, its also...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...eed plan that we agreed to perform next time. Finally, its also very important f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h supposed to be held on November 26th. Therefore, I would be extremely grateful...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reet 123 avenue, and I will pay for it. Lastly, I hope my request does not cause...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to receiving your great response. Best regards Bilal
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g your great response. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97237569061 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71579417247 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723756906077 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0189967193 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200088544156 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590906979922 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086145688062 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106472170742 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107797866323 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.