You recently bought a piece of equipment for you kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter:
describe the problem with the equipment.
explain what happened when you phoned the shop.
say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to you in order to inform you about dissatisfaction with stove that I purchased in your internet-store five days ago.
On the last week I ordered “LG gas stove” on your web-site, paid using my credit card and, as I said, it was delivered to me by your staff. The have been settled it for 2 hours and finally, when it was done I noticed the gas pressure from a burner is very low. It’s very sad, because I like the design of this appliance. Your specialists ensured me that the matter was in the whole gas system of my house and left.
Sorry to say, the pressure is still low and I spoke to my neighbors, they don’t have such problem with their stove. I called a number that wrote on your web-site. Operator told me to wait a call back, but there was no call.
To be honest, I completely disappoint in the services provided by your company. However, I want to ask you to resolve this situation by changing the model of the stove within 5 working days. But this time make sure that stove is totally workable.
Thank you in advance for considering my problem.
Kind Regards
Max Eastwood
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ait a call back, but there was no call. To be honest, I completely disappoint in...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'however', 'so', 'still']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217741935484 0.220444632235 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.165322580645 0.167888034529 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0524193548387 0.0606518309736 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0362903225806 0.0506257000042 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.133064516129 0.118615021944 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104838709677 0.107062808482 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0362903225806 0.041066498444 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58852462882 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0362903225806 0.0385302599488 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0685483870968 0.0714148451538 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0191574576366 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00806451612903 0.00930345855455 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1151.0 1141.60824742 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.134020619 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56038647343 5.53046319177 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78085437643 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.260869565217 0.284621296913 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207729468599 0.211203875043 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144927536232 0.133321485273 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0821256038647 0.0843313296314 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58852462882 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622163163488 103% => OK
Word variations: 66.9163006117 62.8969750728 106% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9230769231 16.4300151701 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9828675175 44.7399317507 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5384615385 90.9928171075 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.4300151701 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.613754768223 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 36.696023783 37.5504026743 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.07228915663 1.13073093955 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34402740068 0.331212695627 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0809621730391 0.0927372745006 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691104992779 0.0736520305886 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.608362382064 0.579516596996 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20905886651 0.180689518051 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125117452577 0.122183219658 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726723326688 0.0765303033291 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.156844514892 0.211926503985 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0844806726407 0.0737400523855 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19557300748 0.203819188451 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451402981281 0.067151250289 67% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.48453608247 404% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.0206185567 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.