Dear sir
My name is Erlangga, I am as your customer, so a few days ago I have bought a kitchen equipment at your shop and something wrong here. In this letter I would like to inform about my problem here that’s I get here from your shop.
Actually two days ago, I have visited to your shop for looking some kitchen equipment. I like your store. There is very clean and comfortable atmosphere, you have complete collection producs of household equipment especially in the part of kitchen equipent, I think I will often to visit your store another time. That I have interested with the stove I have seen there I think ti’s a new release. Then I bought that’s stove, I am very happy before try to use it. So I am in a hurry to go home to try my new stove. I have tried more time but it’s still not working, so I try to phoned to your shop to get a solve my problem, then I talk with the shop representative I tell my problem to them and they said they will give a solve for my problem direcly. But I very disappointed, because I have waited for long time but there is nothing solve from your shop. Your shop is very good please give your customer good services also, so your costomer make your shop as a first choice.
Thank you for giving me the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon.
Your faithfully
Erlangga
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you have complete collection producs of household equipment especially in the pa...
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Line 5, column 606, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... so I try to phoned to your shop to get a solve my problem, then I talk with the shop r...
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Line 5, column 722, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...em to them and they said they will give a solve for my problem direcly. But I very disa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, look, so, still, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30588235294 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40816246206 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525490196078 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7145557428 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4615384615 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294859860378 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112063278637 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599749292573 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209447441395 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276433104228 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.