You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course.
. say how much cooking you've done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Ms Betty,
I, recently, took a short-term course on making custom-made cakes and pastries at your Institute of Fine Cooking at Brisbane during the EID break in August 2019.
I was delighted to find out how well structured the course instruction and material were provided to the student. I baked different types of cakes and decorated them based on various themes. During the course, we learnt how to make chocolate ganache and butter cream frosting, right from scratch. Apart from my interest in baking, I enjoy doing some social work in my free time. Within a week, after finishing our classes, along with some of my classmates at the Institute, we prepared a batch of 80 cupcakes for orphan kids from Paradise for kids. All the students have a unanimous view that the Institute should conduct classes on how to make deserts from Turkish and Arabian cuisine including recipes like Bakhlawa and Kanafeh, which are very difficult delicacies to prepare.
Looking forward to rejoining for another session soon.
Your sincerely,
Lewis Patrick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rse instruction and material were made. I baked different types of cakes and deco...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...decorated them based on various themes. during the course, we learnt how to make choco...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27647058824 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54370788948 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.735294117647 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8787501697 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113919530432 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423124189507 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310326283979 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668206403655 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032689243978 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.