You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter,
describe what you enjoyed about the course
say how much cooking you've done since the course
suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir
First of all, thank you so much for considering me valuable enough to provide feedback for the Indian food course. Furthermore, please find my inputs in this letter.
I was an amateur in the field of cooking before joining the course, but then magic happened. As soon as I enrolled in the program, everything looked extremely easy and comfortable. The credit should go to the excellent guidance of the instructors. I loved cooking all the recipes in the course like Chapati, Lentils, Legumes, Salads etc. However, what I enjoyed the most was preparing desserts. Since I have a sweet tooth and my entire family and friends are huge fans of various sweet preparations, so this section of the course has helped me immensely.
After completing the course, I frequently indulged in preparing a variety of sugary items like pudding, cakes, pastries and a lot of Indian sweets as well for myself and my family. As a result, I received lots of appreciations and encouragement from family and close ones.
Now people are suggesting me to enrol in an adequate program where I can further enhance my dessert skills. So, if I may suggest, would it be possible for you to commence another program which will particularly concentrate on dessert items. I and a few others would be overwhelmed and glad to attend the same.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Jane
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97872340426 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.814030681 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663829787234 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2787574715 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152522141365 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432242118575 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03899932264 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713773588611 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476340037862 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.