You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cooker school, in your letter
* Describe what you enjoyed about the course
* Say how much cooking you have done since the course
* Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John, and I have been asked to give my feedback for the cookery course, which I just finished at your school.
To be the truth, I enjoyed this short vegetarian course a lot. Mainly the chef, John. He knows his profession that how to select dishes, describe recipes appropriately in front of the students that they can learn for the rest of life. It is a remarkable thing which attracts me for the whole course. Even I cook ten vegetarian dishes on my own in this short course, with his instructions. Although, 8 out of my ten food items praised by other students.
I want to suggest that your school should think to conduct some non-vegetarian cookery courses too. Kindly inform me if your school is offering such like courses in future, I would like to join for sure.
Once again, I feel glad to appreciate your school on conducting such an excellent cookery course. Thank you so much.
With Regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John, and I have been asked t...
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...which I just finished at your school. To be the truth, I enjoyed this short ve...
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...is short course, with his instructions. Although, 8 out of my ten food items praised by ...
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...food items praised by other students. I want to suggest that your school shoul...
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Suggestion: in the future
...ur school is offering such like courses in future, I would like to join for sure. Once ...
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...nt cookery course. Thank you so much. With Regards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53774650289 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684523809524 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4609499053 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4545454545 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366117994783 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106117753539 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762650088696 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215357420639 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430753446905 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.