You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
Describe what you enjoyed about the course
Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course
Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Dear Sir,
I am writing to share my feedback about the short-term Chinese cooking course that I had attended at your cooking academy last week.
I would like to mention that the course was very well organised and cleanliness and hygiene was maintained at the kitchen counters. The thing that I found most exciting about the course was that we had to make the entire dish ourselves as per the directions from the head Chef. Moreover the questions and answers session at the end of class was very useful.
I have been preparing all home-cooked meals since the day I completed my course. I prepared the entire Chinese main course for my brother’s birthday and I have received excellent comments from my friends and family.
Could you please let me know about other cooking courses along with their prices in your academy which will help me enhance my cooking skills even further. I am more interested in long term courses in learning different cuisines like Japanese, Indian, American, Italian.
Looking forward to your reply at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Ishween kaur
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...iest. Yours faithfully, Ishween kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05524861878 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51427959955 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2735141667 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244693512524 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881196469488 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566558643475 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130028231922 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614972192777 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.