Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time . Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own .
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
It is believed by some people that parents should motivate their children to spend their leisure time by participating in group activities. However, others opine that children should spend their free time in their own way. In my opinion, I consider that group learning has more merits than self-learning.
On one hand, it is necessary to encourage kids towards participation in team activities and I agree with this view as it improves interpersonal skills and emotional skills. In other words, in a group children interact with each other and this helps them to overcome shyness and build friendly relationships. As a result, they become confident and learn to cooperate in a group. Also playing group sports like basketball, football and cricket has enormous benefits on their health and mental well-being. Furthermore such activities keep children aloof from additive technologies like Ipads , video games and TV , phones which ruin their social life and health.
On the other hand, kids engaging in activities on their own provides them a feeling of independence and being responsible which ultimately leads to development of critical life skills such as decision making. For example, At home, kids often choose between things to keep themselves busy like doing non-fire cooking, simple household chores or playing with their own toys, watching Tv or dancing. This fosters decision making in the young minds. Moreover, it is the most cost effective way to keep kids occupied and content. In other words, It saves a lot of finances for some families who may not be able to afford to enroll their kids in expensive clubs conducting such activities.
In conclusion, while many people vary in their opinions, I think that kids participation in specialised group activities is the need of the hour as it oversomes isolation and keeps kids physically and mentally fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2119205298 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82652895403 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9607387106 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347826126768 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119040935833 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106540219273 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216673210761 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117691138649 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.