Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude on the cookery course I took last month. Thank you for your considerate letter regarding to asking me the feedback of it.
I have cooked meals for my family for two weeks after finishing the class. Most of the dishes were appraised by my parents. Obviously, this was a great progress I made, because of the skills I gained from this course. In the class, my tutor Mr. Smith would not let us make a pizza or fry steaks immediately, instead, he always introduced the cooking porcess in details and share us the mistakes he made when he was an apprentice. After that, with his guidance, everything worked smoothly in the cooking. Moreover, I think I am talented in kitchen by his encouragements.
Now, as the "main chief" in my family, I would like to learn more about Meditterian food. Thus, I will be really appreciated if you can think about openning new courses in this field, which is recommended by doctors and food experts.
Again, thank you for your asking. I am looking forward your reply soon.
Sincerely,
Tony
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78238341969 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7023594103 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694300518135 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.588126084 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241734226659 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745312219282 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871616602247 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172600910733 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125739554237 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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