Whether the professionals like doctors and engineers should work in the coutry thet got trained is up to themselves as my concern, I will elaborate my views as follows.
To begin with, if the trainning programs the professionals require them to work in thr country where they were educated, the professionals should follow the rules and do what they learned in the educational institution to contibute the local community. Otherwise, it is not necessary for them to stay in the country to work unless they would like to. For one thing, in some developed country like US, when the international students gratuated from engineering or medical school, their applicating for jobs in the US is reasonable.However, we should see that they are also competing with the local students so as to affect the local people to get jobs.With this point, the international students graduated from these schools maybe a burden to the local work market. On the other hand, we should see that there are lots of international students got good jobs and contribute more and more than the local students. Pichai, the CEO of google as an example, he as an indian international student developed the most popular web browser Chrome with his team in the year 2009. His success brought us excellent user experince. Meanwhile, we should know that there are still lots of indian and parkistan international medical students graduated from Chiness and US medical school and got back to their motherland to help more and more patients, get them cured, give new births and protect their people from getting sick.
So as I proposed above, we should not require the professionals to work at the country where they studied. It is the basic right of them to choose where to stay and where to work. Even the local people after their graduation from engineering or medical schools, they can go out to the place where they can realize their own value. In this way, the ball passed to the country and the its goverment, since if there is a suitable platform which the professionals can perform better work with better living support from the country, they will go. That is just the policy that Canadian government running now. From baby-sitters to the high-end engineers and doctors, the more proficient skills you have, the more welcome from this country.Of course, there are some prerequsites like the students must graduate from Canadian educational institutions, however, if other countries like European countries can give the superior platform and living-support which the Canada gives, the professionals graduated from Canadian schools may live a new life in Europe, so does in China or US.
In general, I do not support the idea that professionals should work in the country where they got trained, it is the basic right for these people, also, if a country really want to keep these professionals stay, there are more work that the local government should do.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...cating for jobs in the US is reasonable.However, we should see that they are also compe...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... also competing with the local students so as to affect the local people to get jobs.Wit...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
... to affect the local people to get jobs.With this point, the international students ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...way, the ball passed to the country and the its goverment, since if there is a suitable...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Of
...ave, the more welcome from this country.Of course, there are some prerequsites lik...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, still, while, as to, in general, of course, for one thing, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 491.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98370672098 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81731095378 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460285132383 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.221816885 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.133333333 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7333333333 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330537807694 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131151610711 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101304373671 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228923508818 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474040272104 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...cating for jobs in the US is reasonable.However, we should see that they are also compe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... also competing with the local students so as to affect the local people to get jobs.Wit...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
... to affect the local people to get jobs.With this point, the international students ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...way, the ball passed to the country and the its goverment, since if there is a suitable...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Of
...ave, the more welcome from this country.Of course, there are some prerequsites lik...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, still, while, as to, in general, of course, for one thing, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 491.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98370672098 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81731095378 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460285132383 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.221816885 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.133333333 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7333333333 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330537807694 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131151610711 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101304373671 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228923508818 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474040272104 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.