Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concern about the new aviation project which is going to be built in our area.
I saw the news on Television about building the new airport in our locality. Although it is a great idea for creating the new infrastructure for the aviation project, many residents in my neighborhood were unhappy due to this construction because it will build on the lavish park of our area.
Also, our locality is populated by many individuals and roads are congested due to heavy traffic of automobiles. Besides, the air index quality is too low, especially in my neighborhood. Therefore, I request you to reconsider the plan by checking all the parameters before approving to build of the new airport.
Moreover, you can inspect the land around the outskirts of the city for constructing the aviation project. It has more than enough space for construction along with a healthy environment that can be easily sustainable.
I hope you will reconsider my letter before deciding to build this new airport plan.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... approving to build of the new airport. Moreover, you can inspect the land aroun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06629834254 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93820860536 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4339080423 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259548705597 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102796222333 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813631624014 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146128220209 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763088873462 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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