Physical health is an utmost important factor for building a healthier society. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society advocates that sports have gained popularity while others emphasize that it is just a leisure activity. In this essay, I will discuss both views in detail along with my opinion.
On the one hand, various factors make a section of people advocate that playing sports is a vital role in our society. First and foremost is the fact that participating in outdoor sports activities will eventually help individuals in becoming physically fit and healthy. Subsequently. It will reduce the severe effects on our body such as heart-related diseases, obesity problems, and other diseases. For example, a recent survey from the BBC shows that 23% percent of the younglings population in America has been influenced with the obesity problems because of not participating in exercising activities such as Aerobics, Yoga, Gym and playing outdoor games. Therefore, every human on Earth needs to involve in sports activities for staying fit and healthy in their lives.
On the other hand, some believe that playing sports is just a leisure activity for particularly one reason. Indeed, Not everyone has the skills, talent, and ability to become a professional sportsperson in their lives. Consequently, people have considered this activity to relax their minds and remove stress from their bodies during leisure time. However, in my opinion, parents should encourage their children to play outdoor sports since with the advancements of technology many youngsters are focused on playing computer games instead of outdoor sports. This can lead to rising health problems in their lives such as obesity.
In conclusion, although some people believe that sports activity is to enjoy in a free time, I still think that it plays a significant role in the society because of bringing the benefits to people in terms of health and social areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16088328076 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71760656922 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526813880126 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 317.0 20.2975951904 1562% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1636.0 106.682146367 1534% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 317.0 20.7667163134 1526% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 132.0 7.06120827912 1869% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299405636774 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.299405636774 0.084324248473 355% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196394651076 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555797623899 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 161.4 13.0946893788 1233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -250.28 50.2224549098 -498% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 126.9 11.3001002004 1123% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.2 8.58950901804 270% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 128.8 10.1190380762 1273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 127.0 10.7795591182 1178% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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