You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say
What were the problems
Explain how these problems affect the public
Suggest what changes could be made to improve the situation
Write your answer in at least 150 words and start it from:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding the issues related to public transportation service faced by the people residing in Lok Nagar, New Delhi.
There are various problems people face due to inconvenience caused by the public bus service, for example, buses don’t reach the bus station on time, buses are in poor conditions and misbehaviour of bus conductors is a major concern.
As buses are always delayed, working professionals are not able to reach on time due to this. Secondly, the condition of public buses is really bad to an extent that windows are broken and there’s no sign of cleanliness in the buses. Moreover, the bus conductors do not behave well with the passengers as there have been fights with the passengers many times. This has led to poor impression of public transportation system.
I suggest if some changes are implemented, it can solve all the problems that people are experiencing. Firstly, bus drivers should be strictly informed to reach the bus stations on time and they should be monitored for this as well. Another issue regarding keeping the buses clean should be resolved by appointing sweepers. Lastly, bus conductors should be strictly advised not to indulge in fights with the passengers and strict actions should be taken against them in case they do not improve their behaviour.
I hope that you would give due consideration to all these suggestions and take proper actions for the same.
Yours faithfully,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16260162602 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85531418397 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6928248449 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170909151845 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653427347919 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443371678848 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899080477318 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366191167066 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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