You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mr. William,
I am writing to complain about a problem in my apartment which needs to be repaired. Unfortunately, the sink in the kitchen has been leaking for some time because the hose pipe attached to the sink has damaged which requires to be replaced.
Last Sunday, we celebrated the birthday party of my son at my apartment. After the party, while I was washing the dishes, I saw water pouring out from the cabinet under the sink in kitchen. Immediately, I turned off tap to avoid the further leakage of water.
Unfortunately, as I looked through the leaky sink, I found a hole in drain pipe which is causing the leakage. If the problem persists, it will cause dampness under the sink and in turn will cause wood of kitchen’s cabinet to rote.
As you could realize, I am find it difficulty in washing my dishes in the kitchen. I think I would be better if you call a plumber who will fix it and replace the drain pipe. I would appreciate, if you look on it this matter as soon as possible.
Waiting for your prompt action.
Yours sincerely,
Sara Batool
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. William, I am writing to complain about a problem...
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...to rote. As you could realize, I am find it difficulty in washing my dishes in t...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t action. Yours sincerely, Sara Batool
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60309278351 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65772016185 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5453544394 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4166666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147613295507 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532224914817 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457241747596 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734189921624 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407519945426 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.