Dear Restaurant Manager,
Last Monday, we made a reservation at your restaurant located London Downtown since we heard a lot about the diverse cuisine and luxury service you provide. However, we ordered a margarita pizza with a green salad and deep fried chicken but unfortunately, the dishes were horrible. Actually, the pizza was soggy, the sausage was raw and the crust was burnt. Furthermore, the salad was extremely sour. The chicken was fair regarding crispiness but it was flavorless doughy as well. Sadly, the food was unexpected to be at this low level.
In terms of service, The Garson was rude. When we asked him to make an advice to select dishes, he replied to do that ourselves, "it is not my job", he said. Additionally, the table top was dirty with stain spots and food marks also. The waiting time after we issued the order was badly long, it took around 37 minutes to plate the pizza without bringing the appetizers first, that was a shock for us.
Sorry for that, but I think there still a way to fix it. Therefore, I suggest you to offer us a free romantic dinner next week since our anniversary will be on next Friday. That will make us happy.
Regards,
Kareem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...son was rude. When we asked him to make an advice to select dishes, he replied to do that...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s dirty with stain spots and food marks also. The waiting time after we issued the o...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...izers first, that was a shock for us. Sorry for that, but I think there still ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75238095238 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53105877123 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690476190476 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 9.0 0.824742268041 1091% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8424046984 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7692307692 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185161814794 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513009432169 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468222638303 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105083010319 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477177021006 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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