IELTS WRITING TASK 1: PIE CHARTS
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my room-mate. As you know we share one room, I can not study in the room at all any more if I still stay there.
She always has friend visiting and has parties in the room. they make lots of noise and switch on the radio very loudly, for me this environment is very difficult to study and I need a quiet room. Even borrows my things without asking, it is very impolite.
I request you can give me a new room next term because I have been asked her has parties in other place many times they still have parties in the room. I really can not stay in the same room with her.
I would be grateful if you could change me a single room.
Your faithfully,
Catherine
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...d visiting and has parties in the room. they make lots of noise and switch on the ra...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t stay in the same room with her. I would be grateful if you could change m...
^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me a single room. Your faithfully, Catherine
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 618.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41428571429 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34584956979 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3167435921 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0159161601644 0.216113520407 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00721012357591 0.0766984524023 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203933090949 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0104570485954 0.12726935374 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181121394645 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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