You recently met a manager of a new company started in your city. After the meeting, the manager wrote you a letter offering a job at this company. However, you cannot accept the job offer.
Write him back and say:
• How you feel about the job.
• Why can't you accept it
• Provide a reference to your friend who might be interested.
Dear Sir,
I'm truely delighted at your offer for the position of process design engineer at your organization. It is one of the dream jobs I have always wished for and thank you so much for the wonderful opportunity.
I would like to however mention that , I will not be able to accept the offer , as I have joined my current organization an year ago and my presence for the role is mandatory. accepting the opportunity will also question my personal ethics, as my current organization have brought in the project from the client totally based on my assurance towards the project complection. I would have definetly considered the offer, if the project i'm involved in is at the verge of completion. Really sorry for the same.
Mr.Lee, a classmate of mine in masters and an Ex-collegue , who is also a masters in chemical engineering and has got nearly 8 years of industrial experience in biosimilar industry in the production department as process design engineer , I suggest would be an ideal pic for the role which you have offered me. I can forward the details of my friend, if you are interested .
Kindly understand my condition and please donot consider this rejection personally. I will be looking forward to work with your organization in near future.if possible, consider my friend's profile for the curent available role.
Yours Faithfully,
Pavani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir, Im truely delighted at your offer for the ...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... I would like to however mention that , I will not be able to accept the offer ...
^^
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., I will not be able to accept the offer , as I have joined my current organizatio...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s I have joined my current organization an year ago and my presence for the role i...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Accepting
... my presence for the role is mandatory. accepting the opportunity will also question my p...
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Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lee
...ion. Really sorry for the same. Mr.Lee, a classmate of mine in masters and an ...
^^^
Line 11, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...te of mine in masters and an Ex-collegue , who is also a masters in chemical engin...
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Line 11, column 73, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a master' or simply 'masters'?
Suggestion: a master; masters
...asters and an Ex-collegue , who is also a masters in chemical engineering and has got nea...
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Line 11, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on department as process design engineer , I suggest would be an ideal pic for the...
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Line 11, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ails of my friend, if you are interested . Kindly understand my condition and...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92677329141 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9143274341 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.090909091 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13738267117 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058424231796 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473093480251 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088816932114 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058902714234 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.